She is the sparkle in your eyes
Like a million butterflies
whispering a love song to you
she is your angel in disguise
She is the mother of your child
would never see her so mild
her touch is a tricky puzzle
She is born to tame the wild
She was your dream last night
She belongs to the color white
knows you more than you think
she reflects you in plain sight
If you hold that woman in grace
If you stare at her pretty face
If you look into those eyes
If you remain so a thousand days
She awaits your morning grin
she holds up your falling chin
whispering a love song to you
She creates what your world has been..
The last three stanzas are REALLY GOOD..especially the last one and its last sentence the highlight of dis one a little fine tuning of the first stanza and the "crazily wild" thing and that would sum it up to b one of your best poems......proud of u ...way to go sis..!!
ReplyDeleteits not that the first two stanzas are not good but they dont live up to the standards of the last three..
so amazing how this world was made, i wonder if a God is a woman... :)
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